To make this phrase more "proper" or professional, it depends on what you mean by "hit better." Here are a few ways to rewrite it based on different contexts: If you mean performing better or being more successful: Professional: "Ines Juranovic's performance has significantly improved." Casual/Polished: "Ines Juranovic is doing much better now."
Stay Objective: Stick to facts and avoid personal opinions unless it is a commentary piece [11].
Keyword Research: Identify and strategically place keywords in your H1, H2s, and meta descriptions [11].
The long-term winners (from The Daily to Kurzgesagt to HBO) are those who built trust capital. When you release content, the audience asks: "Will I regret spending time here?" If the answer is ever "yes," you have lost them permanently.